grammar check 18

This is the essay from my upper writing class. unlike the traditional essay, this is an
“collage” that combined with a series of short pieces. Our topic is to discuss about the technological experience we’ve had in our lives. My instructor also provide the sample essay to look and I attached it to here too, so that you can better revise my essay.

*Don’t worry about the font size or any other format, i will do this on my own, just correct my grammar error and elaborate some sentences in a way that make more sense (or look more professional if possible)

* Due in two days.

 

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